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  1. Reyna Velazquez, Daniela Salazar, and Sandy Salazar
  2. This is a story about how Reyna and Daniela traveled from Mexico across the border. It talks about what she went through then and the effects of what happened to her.
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  7. “I’m not sure how long we walked for but there was barely any breaks on the way,” Said Velazquez “We walked day and night and we’d all run when we heard a noise.”
  8. beginning
  9. I really like the lede it it makes a good start and is intriguing. 
  10. Reyna's mother 
  11. In some of the statements their is opinion 
  12. I think she did a good job of getting the full spectrum of the story
  13. The best decision 
  14. I really like the story and it has a great meaning 
  15. 93 She had everything really good some quotes were not exactly necessary 

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