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  1.    Hard news leads have detail but usually get right to the point and have a who, what, when, where, why, and how. This story had a lead which did not really tell you much about what you are going to read but still gave some detail about the topic in a longer way.
  2.   Who: 2 What:2 When:2 Where:2 Why:3 How: 3
  3. Yes there are quotes in the story.
  4. yes 
  5. Ted Williams,Kevin McLoughlin, Chenoweth, Ken Andrews, Tony Florentino,  and Shane Cormier
  6. "My boss said to me: 'If you don't get him hired, you're fired,'" 
  7. 33
  8. 758
  9. In the beginning his voice was never heard and now everyone has heard it
  10. To show what happens to people with real talent in such a short amount of time
  11. I like the story because it is very inspiring 
  12. Yeah I wanted to know what this amazing voice could have sounded like
  13. It gave me a better understanding of the true meaning of tis story
  14. I think the video just added a bit of impact to the story because without seeing i I still thought their was a lot of impact
  15. The writer did try and make you hear the voice by describing it
  16. He used smooth baritone to describe the voice which made me then think of that.



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